Needs some work.

1. I think that the sound is the biggest think you need to fix. Try www dot naturalvoices dot att dot com slash demos and see if you can find a better voice.
2. Try making a bubble with the words insted of a top text and characters shaking. Its boring like this.
3. You surelly can do better with animation if you give it some more attention and time.

Thats the basic stuff. Try again !!!

Funny stuff.

It really needs lots of tallent and confidence in youself, to entertain and make people laugh like you do. Keep it up and make a sequel of it.

Nice try

The good thing about this was the graphics. The bad thing was the poor scripting. With a bit more humor it would be twice as good !!

Quite nice.

I enjoyed your game.
A few sugestions:
I would like more colorfull graphics and a
more difficult or an option for more difficult gameplay.
Nice try.

Nice game.

A very nice try. Keep it up.
Some sugestions.
1. Sound is muted or NO sound effects and background music. It will make it more lively.
2. Try adding a blasted cartoon or something after hitting it and a score on it. It will add interactivity.
3. Ger rid of the hand on the mouse with a hide mouse command.
4. Some letters on the side are off screen.
5. The score is weird make it count bonus(eg. +50 ) and the time make it like a bar that shrinks or something.
6 Resubmit this better version.

Great!!

Great idea and well performed. Keep making games like that!!!